{缘永亲笔}Goodbye,2nd term!【中英双语】

缘永庐城

　　Time flied,but I can't save anything.There are too much things in this term,happy or sad.I don't know how I can start this passage.
　　In my opinion,you have to work hard if you want to be successful.I've tried my best in something,but anything vain .Though I failed, I would never give up. I don't think that I am clumsy,well,It's only a question of time.Now,It isn't the time to think something.
　　My reader,could you imagine that? Overnight,almost of your friends have standed off you!I was very sad at that moment,but now,I am realising.It's very naive of me to make friends on the Internet.Everything is hollow,"Gone with the wind".Friendship is a legend on the Web2.0 . In fact,I need to return to the life.
　　It's natural that we have to say bye-bye with some teacher,such as  Miss Peng,Mr. Sun,Mrs Lee. I feel unhappy as soon as I think that..All good things come to an end.We work hard,that is the best recompense for them.All my guide in studying,Keep well everyday!
　　"No cross, no crown. " I've written it in my heart.It's just the beginning of the real duel .

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　　时光飞逝，但是一切于我又无可挽留。这个学期发生了太多的事情，快乐或者悲伤，我不知道从何起笔。
　　在我看来，如果想得到成功便不得不付出艰苦努力。在某方面我尽了全了，但是一切最终皆空。尽管我失败，我从没有放弃过。我不认为我不行，也许，现在只是时间不合适。现在，想一切事情还是有点早。
    我的读者，你能想象这种场景吗？一夜之间，所有的朋友都离你而去。当时我是很悲伤的，不过现在已经领悟。在网上交友对我来说是很自然地，一切虚幻，随风而去。友谊在网络世界中是一个神话。事实上，我应该回到现实了。
　　我理所应当的要和几个老师说再见，彭老师，孙老师，李老师。我一想到这样就会伤心，一切好事都走向了终结。我们的努力就是对他们最好的报答。我人生路上的所有导师，祝您们一生平安！
　　没有付出就没有收获，我会把它牢记于心。真正的对决，刚刚开始。

[ 本帖最后由 缘永庐城 于 2009-7-26 13:46 编辑 ]

缘永庐城

不知道这里换不欢迎英文的？据我所知这里有4处语法错误

升空高飞

看到了句谚语。。
嘿嘿。。
不过
我想应该是there is no gain without  pain

缘永庐城

没有付出就没有收获，在英文中的类似说法确实是No cross, no crown

there be句型是某地（时）有某物，虽然当做“有”讲，但是这点是必须注意的

flyingpig

某英语障碍猪看到以后更加死心塌地的不学英语了......

zmc123

什么叫做 I can't save anything..
你什么都不能挽留么？。。。*em94
按中文的翻译的话应该是 I can't save everything 吧。。
之后的 But anything vain 你也是想要用 Everything 吧。。。
还有哪些名称，既然后面用了缩写的 Mr 和 Mrs，干嘛前面要写全 Miss ，直接用 Ms.不就完了？。。。看起来整齐啊。。

-Now,It isn't the time to think something.
后面的 Something可以去掉了。。
-My reader,could you imagine that?
这里could 改成 Can

-almost of your friends have standed off you!
该成 Almost all of your friends have left you 或者 Abandoned you

-I was very sad at that moment,but now,I am realising.It's very naive of me to make friends on the Internet.Everything is hollow,"Gone with the wind".Friendship is a legend on the Web2.0 . In fact,I need to return to the life.
这里用Sad 感觉不如 Depressed 好， 后面改成 But now i realize that it is very naive to make friends on the internet because everything is hallow, and was "gone with the wind".  friendship on the internet is nothing but a mere lengend. In fact, i should return to the real world.

-It's natural that we have to say bye-bye with some teacher,such as  Miss Peng,Mr. Sun,Mrs Lee. I feel unhappy as soon as I think that..All good things come to an end.We work hard,that is the best recompense for them.All my guide in studying,Keep well everyday!
Bye bye改成 Good-bye会好一点，改成 eventually i had to say good-bye to some teachers;Ms. Peng, Mr.Sun, Mrs. Lee. it makes me sad everytime i think of this,All good things will come to an end. Our hardwork will be the best response to them, to all the people who've guided me through my life, i sincerly wish you well for life.

"No cross, no crown. " I've written it in my heart.It's just the beginning of the real duel
感觉最后那句如果写成 The real battle/duel/challenge have just started 会比较好吧？。。。*em94

以上只是个人意见。。*em94

天堂的幽灵

LSD亮点……

加分给LSD了~~~~

缘永庐城

1.I can't save anything确实是一切都无可挽留，你被女朋友甩一次试试

2.But anything vain .Anything是“任何”，强调

3.关于人称，故意要的这种效果，Miss是年轻女老师Mrs.是中年的，Ms.是婚否未知的

4.-almost of your friends have standed off you!，这条建议很中肯，我接受！

5.这里用Sad 感觉不如 Depressed 好  ————也许你说得对，不多作评论，一人一种看法

6.最后，用It's做形式主语调调客观


总之，十分感谢！

zmc123

不过Ms.就是Miss的缩写。。。*em94

flyingpig

= =....
这里又见一例UU滥用职权.....或者说是亵渎官职...